Personal Ad Makeover: Austin (AFTER)

Austin’s match.com profile was sparse, which is sad, because he has a lot to offer the right girl!

Check out Austin’s original profile and then the Q&A session that provided me with the material needed to write the profile Austin so dearly deserves!

Now, let’s see what Austin’s shined-up profile looks like:

Headline Idea: Where’s your paradise?

About me and who I’m looking for

I was the guy in college who knew everyone’s name – from the people in my dorm to the cafeteria workers.  Going the extra step to show people they’re important is just part of who I am.  I’m no Mother Teresa, but I always remember those behind me and take a few seconds to hold open the door.   Warning!  I have one selfish habit -  the world around me dissolves when I’m immersed in a good movie.  I apologize in advance for my film buff alter ego and promise I’ll make up for ignoring you when we head out for ice cream afterward!

My dream girl is one who likes having doors open for her.  She values the people in her life and finds ways to show them that she cares.   Laughing at my horrible puns is totally optional!   Let’s go downtown and groove to some live jazz or totally ignore each other while watching a great movie.  When I dream of paradise, it looks like Denali National Park on a cloudy day.  What does your paradise look like?

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About e

Since 2008, E. Foley of Geek’s Dream Girl has been helping geeks from around the world find love. She writes amazing online dating profiles for her fellow geeks and guides them through the perilous waters of the dating scene and out the other side. She's totally proud to report that she's even caused a couple geek weddings! She lives in Maryland with DaveTheGame, her adorable cats, Mr. Peanut & Don Juan, and Titania, Queen of the Cocker Spaniels. (Email e, or follow @geeksdreamgirl on Twitter.)

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